I took with me some spreads from my book to show at the final crit:
STRENGTHS:
- clear decisions on content, have thought about how the user interacts with stock and format
- very clear thought process in design sheets, well thought out
- good book plan, clear
- good consistency, the table of the contents, blank space wise is good, make sure rest of the book has similar layout
AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT:
- make sure information more visual especially for the creative audience (more diagrams)
- keep typeface more consistent, at least stick to three
- subheading could be more discrete compared to the heading
- make the CMYK & RGB circles actually colours, very important!
- try alignment type to the left and justifying to improve readability
- pictures - some concepts are difficult to understand without diagrams
- fix a consistent grid throughout the book
CONSIDERATIONS:
- consider your audience, its very text heavy
- what text size is appropriate, useful
- plan / draw layout before digitalising
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