CRIT FEEDBACK
- Type maybe needs more leading x1
- First hand experience shows through a lot, if it is executed right it could be a very useful tool
- nice layout, great contrast between type and image
- very effective layout with a good contrast between type and image
- could make like a newspaper served with coffee and croissant so its like there reading it at a Paris cafe on the street!
- layout could be more engaging, layout pretty plain as it is
- like the simple, well thought out layout and font choice
- the almost vintage style/feel creates a new aesthetic
- be careful of pixelation on one of the photos
- covered important topics, information thats relevant to idea
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